一．            The table shows the total length of high speed train track in three countries in 1990,2010and the projection for 2010.

The table illustrates presents the[A1]  information about the total length of high speed train track in China,France and Japan in 1990,2010 and the projection for 2010[A2] .

It is clear that Japan had the longest high speed train track in1990,with 1200 kms,while France ranked second position ( with 700kms) and China had no high train track at this time .However,the next two decade experienced a sharp increase in high speed[A3] train tracks in China,reaching up to 5800kms in 2010,while the length of high speed train track was 2600kms and 2500kms in France and Japan respectively at in the same year.

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Population aging, which has made it difficult for many companies to recruit eligible young employees, pushes people to rethink whether compulsory retirement has been out-of-date. In my opinion, we should abolish this regulation and create more flexible legal articles instead, to protect the benefits of both workers and employers.

One of the reasons is that mandatory retirement results in a huge waste of human resources. People differ in innate talents, physical conditions and career types, so a unified requirement for their retiring age will probably prevent them from continually contributing to the society. For example, an elder prestigious professor will be required to stop working when he reaches the age for retirement, no matter how well his body function is and how enthusiastic of him to commit to his job. It is counterproductive for him to realize potential to the utmost and achieve a sense of accomplishment, thereby causing a waste of his knowledge and intelligence.

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6.5分雅思作文参考评析

这是一位雅思写作考试6.5分的同学写的作文，应该来说，基础不错，写从句没有问题。这位同学的目标是，写作想上7分。

看到TA的这篇discuss类的文章，很明显，TA很幸运！因为上次考的肯定不是discuss类型的文章。因为这样的写法顶多6.0。显然，TA说上次写的是利弊的题目。

先看看学生原文：

There is a growing consensus that the administrations as well as some industrial companies have the obligation and capacity to protect and promote our living economic achievements have been obtained at the cost of the environmental pollution and the scarcity of resources of local the governments are blessed with sound budget and legal system so that the detailed arrangement cannot be a joint effort can pool enough investment and labor force.

However, it is contended by some critics that, to some extent, personal actions are perfect plan may turn out to be an empty sheet if the residents do not obey the orders and even keep worsening the it is the individuals’ actions, indeed, that put all theories into practice.具体问题如下：

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7.14

雅思作文：

小作文：三分之一分数 150-180字

大作文：三分之二分数 250-280字

如何1+1>2？

1、记笔记：速记 自查

2、看参考书

写作胜经：P115 33篇非常重要，看内容不看结构

00-12年写作机经：每天四道，P28 08.1.10至最后

读话题，找考点

看题型，定结构

划核心词，定同义、近义词

T2解题步骤：

1、审题：话题 题型 核心词

2、思路：必须一分为二

3、结构：4/5段，prefer 4段

4、表达：话题考点

话题：

教育

社会

科技传媒

国家政策

题型：

1、让步反驳 3-7 do u agree or disagree

2、平衡写 5-5 discuss

3、问题解决（PRS）

4、组合题

评分标准：

Content： what why how

Organization： 衔接词

Vocabulary

Grammar：18-22句话，7种不同句型

EX: study in another country 1、论点-7分-一心一意

A great many advantages can be seen from…

First of all, these developed countries are home to some of the most prestigious universities in the world, such as Cambridge and Oxford.

In this sense, XXX can not only offer the best academic environment but also advanced educational facilities to XXX, which, by contrast, might not be easily obtained from their domestic study.

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5分

The university should not provide so much theoretical knowledge but give students more practical training. Do you agree or disagree?

In modern society, more and more people think that the university should not provide so much theoretical knowledge but give students more practical training. However there’s also a lot of people do not agree with them. In my opinion, the university provide student more practical training is very necessary.

First, when people come to university, most of them is more than 18 years old, so they have ability to teach-self. That means student can learn theoretical knowledge mainly by self-teaching rather than by lessons.

Second, in modern society, the practical ability is becoming more and more important. But in school, students rarely have chance to practice themselves. The most of their life is compare with lots of books rather than practical training. Therefore when graduating from university, many students find them can not adapt social working requirement. That makes them frustrated. If this situation happens, it’ll be the failure of high education of the university.

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雅思写作：5分与6分的区别

1.字数不够，不给6分

Tip：多写50字

雅思考试采用人工阅卷，评卷老师不会一个一个字的去数；字数有没有到，完全是凭“目测”。

很多时候，由于书写、版式、空行大小等关系，

明明到了字数的作文，看起来却十分单薄，有字数不足的“嫌疑”。

为了谨慎起见，尽管要求是小作文150字，大作文250字

实际考试要分别写到200字+和300字+，才能保证看起来“够份量”。

2.不分段，不给6分

Tip：必须分段，千万不要整篇文章就“一坨”

小作文2-4段，大作文4-6段；

雅思写作毕竟是一种应试行为，多少带点“八股”，考生必须遵循标准化结构： 开头：1段，介绍话题背景，给出全文观点

中段：2-3个小段，每段有且只有一个分论点；每段开头要有“第一第二第三”，“一方面另一方面”，“首先/其次/再者”之类的标示词

结尾：1段，结论

写作文就是“带着枷锁跳舞”。大家不管用词用句多么鬼斧神工，不管材料和观点多么别开生面，千万不要在结构格式上心血来潮。标准化结构主要目的是方便考官阅卷，迅速查找段意。如果采用怪异/新颖的段落布局，会造成考官阅读不便，降低得分。

3.从句/复杂句没写对，不给6分

Tips：4分作文完全没有复杂句，5分作文有写复杂句，但没有写对；6分作文基本能写出无误的复杂句。

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你一篇作文里面句式有几种；直接关系你的得分

定语从句，状语从句，宾语从句是必须出现的；主语从句、同位语从句、表语从句是加分的；

各种从句怎么写，我们课上说得最多的

不只一个同学问我：从句要掌握到什么程度？

很多人觉得，只要做语法选择题的时候，知道哪里选which哪里用that就算掌握从句了。

但是雅思考试不吃这一套，它的主旨是“实用”。到底有没有掌握，就看你上了考场能不能使出来。

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一，美国梦

我是个从小就十分向往美国的孩子，因为觉得美国是个盛产创造力的国度。 而我喜欢她，喜欢美国总统林肯的故事，喜欢美国的历史。

我喜欢哈利波特，喜欢詹姆斯卡梅隆的终结者，喜欢电影到痴狂。

可是因为高考的失利，让我错失了前往重点大学读历史的愿望，更没有可以读上我喜欢的传媒。

于是我在一个只是三本的学院里，开始了我的旅途。

二，初入项目

我们学校有个去美国的项目，要求雅思过6，单科作文过5.5.

而我当时刚进入项目的时候是大一刚结束，英语成绩才67，高考英语也才107，

我完全没有想过自己能过大学英语6级，因为大学英语四级的成绩也才492. 然后我选择了出国，选择了这条道路就不后悔，我决定坚持到底。 刚入项目的那个暑假我就去了上海的环球雅思封闭班学了一个月，

由于报考雅思的时候报错了，我还没上完课程就直奔回杭州参加了我人生中第一次雅思考试。

20xx年8月14日。顶着炎炎烈日。在我还没完全弄清楚MATCH 和 SUMMARY有什么区别的情况下去傻傻地去了。

口语考试完全不知道说些什么，只讲了7分钟就提前出来了，手还在抖。 结果可想而知 平均5 听力4.5 阅读 5 写作5.5 口语4.5

无比烂的分数令我觉得可耻。

之后才开始了我为期10个月左右的雅思折磨。

三，认识雅思

虽然第一战完全是在没有准备的情况下去的，我对自己还是蛮有信心的。 就开始第二轮的复习。由于这学期平时的课程太多，几乎是从早上8点上到下午5点，晚上还有公选课。

只有靠每天插空挤时间，每天一篇阅读和听力，然后开始精听剑4-6的SEC3和SEC4。

用了一个寒假的时间，又去了一次雅思考场，结果是5.5.

作文依旧是5.5 阅读是 5 可是听力变成了5.5 口语也变成了5.5

这中间我对听力的坚韧程度到吓人，我就去找各种学听力的书，王陆的807单词，几乎是每天一篇。大概半小时，

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